Eggshells

Comedy

Feb 4

Written By Jef Holbrook

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STORY

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VISUALS

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SOUND

The sound choices made in the film served the story. Each sound element, from dialogue to music to foley and mixing, felt intentional and was artfully and skillfully done. The sound did not upstage or take the audience out of the story. Please choose your rating below, 1-5 stars:

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EDITING

The editing served the story. Any attention called to the edit itself feels like an intentional choice of the filmmaker and not like an accident or caused by lack of technical skill or thought. The edits serve the storytelling pace and brings together the visuals, sounds and story in a well-crafted manner. The titles and credits feel intentional and human, not merely default choices made by software. Please choose your rating below, 1-5 stars:

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ACTING

The actors serve the story being told above serving themselves. If there is a "star turn" or "stunt casting" it serves the story, has been done well and the actors feel appropriate for the role. If the project stars the same person who wrote or directed it, that should not be allowed to distract them from the responsibility of a good performance.. The actors should bring the characters to life in a compelling and authentic way that fits the style of the film. Please choose your rating below, 1-5 stars:

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Jef Holbrook

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https://jefholbrook.com

Eggshells

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